ext_366579 ([identity profile] bluewillowtree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jennickels 2011-06-28 10:07 pm (UTC)

"I knew the day I met her. The way you two looked at each other." She snickers quietly. "I knew she was trouble."

He laughs at that. "Yeah, I knew that, too."

That is perfect - it's so both of them! I love it!

I also love the bittersweet tone of the third story. You've done a beautiful job of capturing their longing.
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