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jennickels ([personal profile] jennickels) wrote2011-06-08 01:55 pm
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Stargate SG-1 fic: Just the Beginning

This is the 2nd story for challenge #1 at [livejournal.com profile] fictionland with the theme of beginnings.  It wasn't written necessarily as a sequel to Save the Last Dance but you can take it that way if you like.

Just the Beginning
by jennickels (aka Jen Connelly)
Stargate SG-1
(Daniel/Vala)
496 words
rating: PG-13
WARNINGS:


The morning after starring Daniel and Vala... it's just as awkward as Daniel knew it would be.


don't own... wish I did, but I don't. No infringement intended.


[story header made by the very awesome [info]campylobacter ]

"So... this is awkward."

Daniel felt his face flush. He glanced over at the woman sharing his bed. Her thick, dark hair swam around her head in a tangled mess, almost completely covering the pillow. She clasped the edge of the blanket tightly to her chest. Her bare chest. He looked back up at the ceiling.

Daniel couldn't remember Vala ever looking so unsure of herself. Or so beautiful. He realized she was waiting for some kind of reply. Swallowing the growing lump of uncertainty in his throat he said, "yeah, kind of."

"Maybe we had a little too much to drink last night."

Daniel had said as much... several times. He remembered that much. "Maybe," he mumbled. The alcohol induced fog was beginning to lift but it was being replaced by a wave of confusion. But he distinctly remembering wanting this—very much. He snorted. Funny it was Vala having regrets. He glanced over at her again. At least now she was looking at him, even if it was with guarded eyes, her lips pulled tight into a thin line and every muscle rigid with discomfort.

"I should go," she said suddenly, rolling away and taking the covers with her. Daniel scrambled out of bed to find his pants.

"Vala..." He trailed off when she just stood in the room staring at the scattered clothes, the blanket held like a protective shield around her. This was not a Vala he had experienced before. He found it unnerved him more than a little to see her so unbalanced.

He picked up her satiny dress, letting the soft material slide through his fingers. He remembered the way she had shimmied out of it the night before... much to his delight. She gave him a half-hearted smile and shrug when she saw him staring at it.

Daniel sighed. "What's wrong?"

She looked at him like she was surprised by the question. Daniel couldn't help but smile. Suddenly very sure he wanted to be here with this woman he closed the distance between them. Vala gasped in surprise when he planted a kiss on her and he grinned into her lips, marveling that he could shock her like that. Finally she started to relax, her lips slackening against his, mouth opening enough for him to slide his tongue in. Her grip on the blanket faltered. Or maybe she just let it go. Either way it fell to the floor and she pressed her soft body against his setting every nerve ending on fire.

"No regrets?" Her voice was smaller than he had ever heard it.

He rested his forehead against hers. "I'm not exactly a one night stand kind of guy, you know." She swallowed hard at his words which bolstered his courage. "I knew what I was getting into when I agreed to this last night."

Her contented sigh was agreement enough and he pulled her back to the bed to show her how serious he was.

[identity profile] ami-ven.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 07:45 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice! I could absolutely see this happening with them *g*

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. You KNOW there would be all sorts of awkward if they ever got into bed with each other.

[identity profile] regularamanda.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
DAWWWWWWW!!! ♥ Loved it! :D I could totally see Vala being the one that was nervous :)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I liked that twist. And Daniel would totally find her nervous unsurity to be endearing.
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (fruitcake)

[identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh yesssss, you are hitting the Daniel/Vala issues common to morning-after scenes!

I love the visual image of all of Vala's beautifully messy hair all over Daniel's one of pillows.

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Everything concerning Daniel and Vala is an issue.
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (geek-sexy)

[identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Regardless of whatever Daniel pairing I read (Jack/Daniel, Daniel/Vala, Daniel/Sha're, Daniel/Cam...) Daniel's Issues® are the bane of many a fanfic author!

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY, another banner. Off to go insert it.



[that sounded really dirty]

[identity profile] shakespherical.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
jjjkad;lsauti;desoaitjgk!Kjkl; WHy is this so sexy? The blanket dropping, the satiny dress slipping through his fingeers. Girl, you can write! MORE is needed immediately!

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
Funny thing is I'm not that comfortable writing Daniel/Vala.

[identity profile] dani101.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
lovely!:)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:11 am (UTC)(link)
thanks

[identity profile] eilidh17.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Guh! Please, Ma'am... can we have some more?

Beautifully written and you've captured the essence of Daniel and Vala perfectly :)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
If I get inspired... most definitely.

Maybe I should make a post about what people want to read in Daniel/Vala fic. I think my Jack/Sam post has the most replies ever. Although only a few responses actually address the question, lol.

[identity profile] eilidh17.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
A prompt post, perhaps? Ask for prompts which you could then use in a Daniel/Vala centric fic. Short and sweet :)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe I should.

Mostly I need ideas of what people might want to read in general. I don't normally write Daniel/Vala so I'm not sure what else to do with them. But prompts would be good, too.

[identity profile] eilidh17.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
Only one way to find out :)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 06:15 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe I'll make one tomorrow. I'm going to lose my internet access next week sometime (for who knows how long) so maybe I'll get some inspiration from the post before I can't access it.

Then come back from my hiatus with a ton of new fic.

[identity profile] eilidh17.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
And then we can all die happily of D/V squee! I'll be looking for that prompt post :)
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (facepalm)

[identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 05:30 am (UTC)(link)
D'oh! Sorry about that.

My comments auto-Tweet unless I un-check the box, so my Daniel/Vala Tweeps kinda glomped on your LJ and had a party at that entry. Signal boost, I HAZ IT.
ext_181287: (Default)

[identity profile] dankriss.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 06:07 am (UTC)(link)

Very sweet....

Kriss :)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 06:15 am (UTC)(link)
thanks

[identity profile] anna-sg1.livejournal.com 2011-06-15 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
like a few people already commented, the imagery in this little fic is amazing and beautiful - from Vala's hair, the balnket and Daniel holding the dress. ♥

Great fic. :)

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-18 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
thanks, glad you liked it

[identity profile] spacegypsy1.livejournal.com 2011-06-16 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
Loved it!

[identity profile] jennickels.livejournal.com 2011-06-18 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
thanks