I thought about expanding the story to explain more of what was going on and about the people on the moon. And how they react to being isolated. But I came up with the idea for the drabble prompt and decided to actually stick to the 100 words which meant all that had to go.
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Date: 24 Aug 2012 04:49 pm (UTC)I thought it worked pretty well.
To get the line you type < hr> without the space.