I do POV switching in first person (yes, I know, and I'm sorry). Question the strength of my voices all day long, but even I know you can't switch in the middle of a chapter. And you plot stuff makes me wish I coukd make my story YA, but I think it's too violent. I'd definitely have to edit out a ton of f-bombs.
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Date: 5 Jan 2013 12:13 pm (UTC)