An alternate ending to the shower scene in the Broca Divide.
(This story was originally written in 2011 and has been updated for composition and clarity in 2020.)
(This story was originally written in 2011 and has been updated for composition and clarity in 2020.)
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“I don’t think so.” Carter’s breath is hot in his ear, and she starts to trail kisses down his neck.
Jack groans in frustration as every nerve ending in his body fires at once, sending a shiver down his spine—something that normally he would appreciate but not right now with this woman who obviously wasn’t in her right mind. Carter must feel him tremble because she growls into his skin, and her touch roughens, teeth sinking into his shoulder. He sucks in a sharp breath, fighting for control—of himself and her.
“Carter-” His own voice is rough and giving away much more than he would like.
“Sir?” The way that word falls from her lips ignites even more lusty thoughts, nearly undoing what little internal control he has left. He pushes the shower fantasy to the back of his mind, thankful somewhere in there he still has some sense.
With great effort, he pulls away, trying to get his knees under him. But Carter has other ideas. She catches him off balance, hooking a leg over his hips and twisting. Jack crashes back to the ground shocked at her sudden increase in strength. She squirms in his grip until he finds himself flat on his back, the wet floor dampening his clothes.