Ah, this explains why Jem's story did not have Evita and Jaime as unaware ghosts-- yours did!
I love the feeling of the time here, and the vividness of the narration. This character felt very real, and I ached for her loss of Albert and rejoinced in her happiness at the end. Lovely.
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Date: 5 Jun 2013 10:29 pm (UTC)I love the feeling of the time here, and the vividness of the narration. This character felt very real, and I ached for her loss of Albert and rejoinced in her happiness at the end. Lovely.